inoccent
NFL Starter
Die Hard Lions Fan or Idiot #1 if you prefer
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Post by inoccent on Aug 7, 2015 6:32:28 GMT -5
Alright as some of you know, I'm going into Journalism as my eventual career, so I'm working on keeping a site going as a way to practice and get myself out there. Instead of hijacking an innocent thread like I accidentally did last time I decided to make one here where everyone can roast me and not get in the way!
My page is inoccent1.wordPress.com and please be honest with me. I'll learn more from people being "assholes" than I will trying to kiss my ass. I greatly appreciate everyone who takes the time to read my articles and such. Every time I get a new article done I'll post it here
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Post by Juggs on Aug 7, 2015 9:46:07 GMT -5
Great idea. I'm at work, but I'll critique later.
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Post by mitch9234 on Aug 7, 2015 15:21:03 GMT -5
Is inoccent a good name for this blog? They might think you can't even spell correctly
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Post by Jindred on Aug 7, 2015 15:25:52 GMT -5
Which one of you is this eh?  *cough* Umm I have no idea.. but its aboot damn time we see some canucks ere eh? *cough* I mean.. Its about damn time we see some Canadians here don't cha think? Maybe we should go up on the ruf and have some freedom fries and a brewski >< |
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Post by MrCincinnati on Aug 7, 2015 17:52:14 GMT -5
I would recommend covering more than just the Lions, if you want to get more people to read the blogs IMO.
If you want to just stick with the Lions or Detriot sports, prehaps you should promote it somewhere where they are more detriot fans.
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inoccent
NFL Starter
Die Hard Lions Fan or Idiot #1 if you prefer
Posts: 1,750
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Post by inoccent on Aug 7, 2015 18:20:24 GMT -5
I would recommend covering more than just the Lions, if you want to get more people to read the blogs IMO. If you want to just stick with the Lions or Detriot sports, prehaps you should promote it somewhere where they are more detriot fans. I'm not so much trying to promote it here I'm just looking for advice on my writing style, how I word things, grammar, etc. I know more about the Lions than I do other team so I figured that would make them the best guinea pigs to hone my writing style. |
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Post by MrCincinnati on Aug 7, 2015 18:40:24 GMT -5
I would recommend covering more than just the Lions, if you want to get more people to read the blogs IMO. If you want to just stick with the Lions or Detriot sports, prehaps you should promote it somewhere where they are more detriot fans. I'm not so much trying to promote it here I'm just looking for advice on my writing style, how I word things, grammar, etc. I know more about the Lions than I do other team so I figured that would make them the best guinea pigs to hone my writing style. Ok whoops. Guess that's what I should of read the description better. I don't have any tips to offer than in this case. I'm more better when it comes to making videos and talking about sports on there instead of typing something out. |
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inoccent
NFL Starter
Die Hard Lions Fan or Idiot #1 if you prefer
Posts: 1,750
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Post by inoccent on Aug 7, 2015 19:18:27 GMT -5
I'm not so much trying to promote it here I'm just looking for advice on my writing style, how I word things, grammar, etc. I know more about the Lions than I do other team so I figured that would make them the best guinea pigs to hone my writing style. Ok whoops. Guess that's what I should of read the description better. I don't have any tips to offer than in this case. I'm more better when it comes to making videos and talking about sports on there instead of typing something out. I'll eventually start trying some of that out once I feel more comfortable about my writing. |
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Post by 101mitch on Aug 7, 2015 19:54:29 GMT -5
Just a grammar mistake, but "was a offseason priority" The A needs to be an.
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