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Post by mitch9234 on Feb 1, 2013 21:55:48 GMT -5
What the hell I can't tell If he's lookin' to sell Or just ringin' this bell But I'm here to say The boy can play And he's making me pay For the chance to play... ... in his league. Word. ;D Not bad. The second verse was a lot better
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Miss Lacy
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Post by Miss Lacy on Feb 1, 2013 22:03:59 GMT -5
What the hell I can't tell If he's lookin' to sell Or just ringin' this bell But I'm here to say The boy can play And he's making me pay For the chance to play... ... in his league. Word. ;D Not bad. The second verse was a lot better Oppss--- go back. You miss it. I EDITED that verse. ;D
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Post by mitch9234 on Feb 1, 2013 22:53:28 GMT -5
These songs pretty much stain the culture in here haha. Love me some Sepultura, Soulfly, and ill nino, Brazil makes good metal bands. It's the same way in new mexico =P Though cowboys from hell is probably better at painting the picture. I'm not a big fan of metal Some heavy classic rock works better for me haha
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Post by mitch9234 on Feb 1, 2013 22:53:50 GMT -5
Not bad. The second verse was a lot better Oppss--- go back. You miss it. I EDITED that verse. ;D still good
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Post by Miss Lacy on Feb 2, 2013 1:08:28 GMT -5
still good Yeah---that's only cuz that verse gave you your well-deserved props for posting your 1st poem. Like I said---the boy's a poet. ;D AND-- I believe I already gave my opinion about critiquing all that subjective personal perspective. Sooooo, I'm just glad you FINALLY decided---what the hell-- and shared your own unique literary style. Word.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2013 15:11:03 GMT -5
Well played mitch! Congrats
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